Thesis: The decision by policy makers on California budget cut of education field seriously impacts not only current students but also instructors and future students at San Jose State University.
Outline
* Intro &Thesis statement
A. Future students
1. Being refused to enter the university by more than 3,000
2. Have to attend other universities and colleges
B. Current students
1. Should pay higher tuition
2. Take a financial aid
3. Less but bigger classes
4. Should stay longer at the school
5. The larger number of students and professors ratio
C. Instructors
1. Decrease the number of lectures that they had have
2. Should work harder
3. Losing jobs
* Conclusion
Your thesis is interesting, especially about the future students of SJSU. Why are they effected? How? be more specific even in your thesis. But, don't just regurgitate the information; make it provocative.
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